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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11497
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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I think learning by reading is better than close observation.The world is big.It contains a lot of things need we to learn.If we five everithing close observation that would require a lot time and energy,and it is imporsible.So we should learn from book.Books contain the information wo need to survival in these world and it its also a convinent way to learn.The other reason i prefer reading to learn is that.Many intelligent people give their observation experience about the nature in the book.And their idea had been proved many times.We don't need do everithing from zero.The most import way to learn from them is to read their books.Above all i prefer learning by reading.

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