2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；文中词汇表达丰富度要加强，同时要注意单词拼写。

As known ,Weitou sea is the interestingplace in my hometown . When it comes to summer , many people come to the weitou sea along with their kids , they can play water ,and pick up some sea food .they can make so many fun from sea .At the modern life ,A large people will not perfer to visit a famouse city during their holiday , they choose some nature view with their family .