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With the development of Internet,more and more people are used to making friends online chat tool.Such as QQ,Wetchaint and so on.In my opinion,I think that we can make friends online,but before we decided to make friend with somebody.We must think it seriously. On the one hand,we may come across all kinds of friends online.For example,as a English major student,we need to improve our oral English by talking with others.In the reality,we have less or no chance to meeting a foreign.However,we can find foreigns online by some chat software.And we can make friends with them and talk to them in order to improve our speaking English.In that case.Internet gives us more chance to meet friends with those who we can not meet in reality.On the other hand,when we talk with our friend meet online.We may feel more free,sometimes we come acrros trouble or setback,and we want to tell it to our fammiliar friends then we can talk with our friends who meet online.May be they can give us more comfort. In short,I think it is neccerary for us to make friends online,but we should learn to recongize if the people is nice.
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