小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

Today is the first holiday.Last night, I maked a plan.about this holiday.I hope I have a happy holiday.I will read many book, read I want to read is book, and I like is book. Today is Thursday, and this is second holiday.In the morning, I sleep to nine o'clock.I feel amaze.get up the bed, I eat the breakfast.Then, I bath.Now, I writing the English diary. Goodby!I'm going to study English.On,my red pen is broken!I only use blue pen.