小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。

Today is the first holiday.Last night, I made a plan.about this holiday.I hope I have a happy holiday.I will read many book, read the book my want to read , and my favourite book. Today is Thursday, and this is second holiday.In the morning, I sleep to nine o'clock.I feel amaze.get up the bed, I eat the breakfast.Then, I bath.Now, I writing the English diary. Goodby!I'm going to study English.On,my red pen is broken!I only use blue pen.