采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。
Nowadays,Internet is very common in people's life and it is very useful for us.we can use computer to get information or chat online with your friends,and so on.Internet is a great invention for the world.it is not only change the way of shopping,but also make people to work at home.I can image if it is not Internet what will the life would be like.People can live without Internet.I usually use Internet to send email at work,it is convenient and cheap way to comunicate with your boss and colleages,so i feel that is very efficiency. When i am at home,i also like to use Internet to chat with my friends,i can make lots of friends who is from different country.In the past,there is little chance to make friend from abroad,but now it is become real.I can see them on screen and talk with them use English,so i pratice my English online with my foreign friends,they are happy to help me to improve my English.In my opinion,Internet is good for our life,however ,there are some worries about the Internet.For example,we can see so many bad news about Internet.Some childred are additcted to the Internet,and play game.They don't want to go to school,just because the game,it is a bad effect for our life. All in all,eveything have two sides ,we should treat it reasonable.We must use it in the right way,and not in the wrong way.
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