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Nowadays,Internet is very common in people's life and it is very useful to us.we can use computer to get information or chat online with your friends,and so on.The Internet is a great invention for the world.It is not only change the way of shopping,but also make people work at home.I can't image if it is not Internet what will life be like.People can't live without Internet.I usually use Internet to send email at work,it is convenient and cheap way to comunicate with your boss and colleages,so i feel that is very efficiency. When i am at home,i also like to use Internet to chat with my friends,i can make lots of friends who is from different countries.In the past,there is little chance to make friend from abroad,but now it is become real.I can see them on screen and talk with them use English,so i practice my English online with my foreign friends,they are happy to help me to improve my English.In my opinion,Internet is good for our life,however ,there are some worries about the Internet.For example,we can see so many bad news about Internet.Some children are additcted to the Internet,and play game.They don't want to go to school,just because the game,it is a bad effect for our life. All in all,everything have two sides ,we should treat Internet reasonable and use it in the right way.
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