高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

My Hometown The hometown in my memory is surrounded by a great many of trees, a small river passed by in which you can watch fish play in cristal clean water, there were only small houses along the narrow street,people were working hard but still bearly made the ends meet.Now, small houses were replaced by high buildings,factorys and stores, there are cars all over the place. but as the industrilization goes on, a lot of pollution is casued, the trees were cut down and the water in the river is no longer suitable for the fish to live in. that is not developing all about, we need to start solve the pollution issue immediately.