高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足。

My Hometown The hometown in my memory is surrounded by a great many of trees, a small river passed by in which you can watch fish play in cristal clean water, there were only small houses along the narrow street,people were working hard but still barely made the ends meet.Now, small houses were replaced by high buildings,factories and stores, there are cars all over the place. but as the industrilization goes on, a lot of pollution is caused, the trees were cut down and the water in the river is no longer suitable for the fish to live in. that is not developing all about, we need to start solving the pollution issue immediately.