高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者在句法层面做的很棒；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足。

My Hometown The hometown in my memory is surrounded by a great many of trees, a small river passed by in which you can watch fish play in cristal clean water, there were only small houses along the narrow street,people were working hard but still barely made the ends meet.Now, small houses were replaced by high buildings,factories and stores, and there are cars all over the place. But as the industrilization goes on, a lot of pollution is caused, the trees were cut down and the water in the river is no longer suitable for the fish to live in. That is not developing all about, we need to start solving the pollution issue immediately.