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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

We all have different views of beauty.It is common that we woul choose a good-looking one if we have choices.We usually judge people by their appearance.However,is it wise to judge others by their appearance? We usually spend a lot of time analysing and fixing things that aren't quite right.On the contrary,we spend less time on things we do like. I watched a Swedish ad several days ago. It emphasized that it was what's inside that counts.Most people are blinded by the appearance.Take Jack Ma for example,he doesn't have a good-looking appearance.He is not handsome at all.But he is successful in business and family. It is unwise to judge people by their appearance.Sometimes you may lose many chances if you judge things by their appearance.Never judge others by their appearance.

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