正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear Lin Tao, I was happy to hear form your letter. You asked me for some advice on learning English. At first, I also found it hard for me to remember so many words and phrases. I also had some grammar problems when I was in first grade. But now I find that the best way to work out the problem.First,reading the pronunciation is good to remember the words.There are some useful rules in the pronunciation, and they can help me remember new words easily.Second,I try to read more and practice more.I often go to the cinema to watch the English movies.It can help me to practice the grammar. Now it isn't very difficult for me to understand the sentences and passages. That's my secret of learning English. I hope it helps you. Please never give up! Best wishes Yours, Mike