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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:997
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Although honesty is very important for us, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake products to their consumers; some students cheat on exams; some people tell lies to avoid responsibility or avoid being punished. Dishonest people are short sighted. What they do brings harm not only to others but also to themselves. Those people who sell fake products may make money at first, but if they were found out, no one will buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune. What’s worse, they will even be sent to prison. In contrast, honest people gain a lot. They brings benefit to others as well as to themselves. Those people who always tell truth or keep to their promise can win trust and respect from their customers. Because they are trustworthy and respectable, everyone is willing to be their friend and everyone wants to buy their products. Undoubtedly, they will make a great fortune in the end. In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest in whatever we do and say.

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