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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第43篇:独自一人学习还是跟朋友一块儿

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:19浏览次数:1781
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作文题目:

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一些学生喜欢自己一个人学习,而另外一些学生喜欢结伴学习。你更喜欢哪种呢?给出具体原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。

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When studing i usually prefer studing along rather than with friends.Because when studing alone i can concentrate my mind on the subject i learn.Without the disturbance from others i will study more efficency.But study a lone also has ites drawback.When i have some questions i can't understand no one i could turn to.Learning a long also make me feel of less compete.Someone like i can't good control himself might find study a lone is a difficult thing.Dispite its drawback learn alone can also have ites benefits.As we cound'n turn to others it forse to think by ourself that is a good experience for study.Sometime the procedure is slow but it is worth.I like study alone.

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