高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

My hometown is situated in the middle of our city.In the past,it has beautiful scenery that be surrounded of green trees and the fishs were having fun in the lake,what's more,the house was simple and brude,person's woke-life were poor.But now,it has made great changes in my hometown.The high buildings are standing there densely and the big and large cars always appear in the street,even if the change brings much benefit,it also brings some troubles,such as the trees has reduced quickly and the fish has disappeared,it has no time to wait so we should take some methods to deal with the problem of pollution.