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2012年专四作文真题:端午节

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要求：: 题目 The Dragon Boat Festival
说明 The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：200满分：100分

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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇。

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The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is one of the important national festivals in China.Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization language and appropriateness Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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