2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the increasing development of economy society,a great many of modern technology has apperead in our daily life.There is not surporise that most of us cann't thingk that if we have not computer.That's so dramatically.However,The computer has bring a lot of good things to us,we should use it in a effective way. Everthings has two sides.As we all know that the computer bring great comveniment to communicate with others,but it doesn't represent we can have a wonderful friendship.As we all know that the computer bring many information to us,but it doesn't represent we get news from other people.More importantly,if we spend lots of time in computer,we should lost a lot of things,such as a significant of friendship or a nice family.