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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8979
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

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可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写。

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Don't judge people with thier appearance。just as saying goes , “Don't judge a book by its cover."With the development of socity and living level,most people regard the beauty as more important.I think if you juge a person by his cloths you only can get his taste of cloths, but taste of cloths not equal to the taste of life So, we can't judge a person by appearance.Person has its own style and some people don't have possibility to buy such expensive clothes as some others. We can judge people by their character,behavior, but not by the clothes they wear.Such as MuYun,who is short and not handsome ,honestly.I am sure that you will totally ignore him when you see him firstly.You wil just ragard him as a person who is poor or a simple employee.If he tells you that he founded Alibaba.You may call him fool.Don't judge anyone by appearances

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