题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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There is no denying the fact that we are losing trust when we people are contacting with other.For example,on the one hand,some people ruin the balance of market by selling fack commodities.On the other hand,we are always fooled by other people because of trusting others. Then,what should be done to keep trust among human being?To start with,our government ought to sings highly to those heroes who are honest in his part.So that they can inspire our emotion.Secondly,education is important.As we know,one's initial education result to his behave in his life.Thus,schools are urged to teach students how to be a honest man.Most important of all,it is never too late for us to improve trust among mankind.So we are supposed to watch us own bahave and only in this way can we bulid a harmonious social.