2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累高级词汇，拼写错误也要注意。

As we all know，there are many different kinds of tourism around the world especially the developed countries。But i think that with the developing of tourism，it still bring much harm to the environment。 When we visit some intersts of places，we can see many people who are visiting are carring all sorts of food，however，when they ate these food，they threw the packing bags away here and there，on the other hand，some other people carve some words on the stone or the wall，these behavior brought extreme harm to the environment。In order to avoid these situations appearing，we should improve people's moral and take a series of measures to protect our wonders and punish people who did harmful things to interests of places。