文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;衔接成分偏少。
I had a good friend. Her name is Lily.She has long hair and black eyes. She is very kind.Every day,we go to school together. She always helps me when I meet troubles. And she invites me to visit her sometimes.Her mother can make delicious food and we both enjoy it. What's more ,she is very smart.