小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。

I had a good friend. Her name is Lily.She has long hair and black eyes.She is very kind.Every day,we go to school together. She always helps me when I meet troubles.And she invites me to visit her sometimes.Her mother can make delicious food and we both enjoy it.What's more ,she is very smart.