作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
Tomorrow is another day You could never imagine how a book can influence a person. Every time I met difficulties, I felt like that I could not go through them. However, since I read “Gone With The Wind”, my mind has been changed. Life is difficult , but we should face it. The person who taught me that was Scarlett O’ Hara, a great woman. As a result of being born in a plantation owner’s family and being charming, Scarlett was very proud, vain and wilful.