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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，不过单词拼写方面要继续努力；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Hi My name is Hubin.I saw a new product of your company on the exbition from Dec.15th to 22th in the New York.Your new Product name is 5670.I am very insting in it.So can you send us one piece of price list and instructions? Thankyou for your cooperation,I hope we can establish business relationship in the future. My email address is Hubin@163.com.Wating for you good news,thankyou! Hubin
