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It was recently reported in a newspaper that some college students hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning at a dorm.In my opinion,college students shouldn't hire cleaners to do these works. They are college students now.They are responsible to do these works and make the dorm they live well-qrganized.At the same time,as growing adults,they must be more mature and learn to be independent without parents'meticulous care.They should learn to deal with lonely everything no matter how different in learning and living. What's more,as we all know,college students are a special group.Their economy is not fully independent.At more time,their economic sources depend on their parents' hard work.For this,college students have enough reasons to cherish the hard work of parents and the money they are wasting.On the contrary,they should spend the money doing those necessary things not to hire cleaners doing works that should have been done by themselves. In short,it's a duty for college students to manage their own learning and life.Anyone who succeeded is not only the one can gain knowledge but also arrange his life well.
