健康对我们来说非常重要, 我们有很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80个词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。
短文首句已给出,不记入总词数, 可适当发挥。
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;文中有几处错误的句子,部分句子偏简单;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Good ways to keep healthy It's important to keep healthy for us. Because own health body can live greatly.Now let me tell you how to keep health. First,We eat more vegetables can quickly grow up,don't eat junk food.Because the junk food was broken our body and bland.Second,teenager eat more friuts.Because keep a slender figure are a dream of each girl.Third,persist in doing sports can keep fit. I hope that people can keep a habit to live,doing exercise every day.Own a healthy body.
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