正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
I think it is too easy to learn English.And I also have some good ways to learn English. Two years ago,I can not learn English well.And I always make mistakes in grammar.My spoken English was so poor that I can not communicate with others. One day,my English had a long communication with me.And I understand that I can do it well if I want. From then on,my English level improve fast!