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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇，但请认真检查词汇的拼写。
It's the first year of my college life.And I came to my college life with excitement and expection.But later,I realized that there are so many differences between my college life and my middle school life. At first,I never have lived in the dorm before I go to college.And to be truthly,I hate to live in a dorm with other people.I enjoy my own world,but the dorm life can't give me enough freedom.Second,the class rooms are always change and I can't put my books into my desk,because other classes will have class in there.Third,I can't stand that the complex interpersonal relationships.I know that I must keep in good touch with others,but sometimes,I'm tired of it. Well,I like my college life as well.I can see a bigger world and I make many friends who are from everywhere.And I learnd how to be independent and I can do more things than before.I will enjoy my life.
