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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
Nowadays,there is an increasing number of personal cars in our life. On the one hand,personal cars brings our citizens convience,nevertheless,on the other hand,it may cause a series of problems too,such as air pollution,traffic jams... So what can we do about this kind of developing problems? Individually,we can ride public bycles as much as possible, it not only can build our bodies,but also strengthen our heart,even reduce the heart pressure. Let's work it together to make the world a better place!
