2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(23):私家车

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中从句数量过少；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用。

Nowadays,there are an increasing number of personal cars in our life. On the one hand,personal cars bring our citizens convenience,nevertheless,on the other hand,it may cause a series of problems too,such as air pollution,traffic jams... So what can we do about this kind of developing problems? Individually,we can ride public bicycles as much as possible, it not only can build our bodies,but also strengthen our hearts,even reduce the heart pressure. Let's work it together to make the world a better place!