采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;请作者增加高级词汇的使用,不过单词拼写做的很好;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。
Tomorrow is another day You could never imagine how a book can influence a person. Every time I met frustrations, I felt like that I could not go through them. However, since I read “Gone With The Wind”, my mind has been changed. Life is difficult, but we should face it. The person who taught me that was Scarlett O’ Hara, a great woman. As a result of being born in a plantation owner’s family and being charming, Scarlett was very proud, vain and wilful.She had been married three men whom she did not love. Though the man she loved married his cousin, she still kept showing her love to him, which made her third husband lose his patience to her.