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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇基础不错,还请增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩。

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Tomorrow is another day You could never imagine how a book can influence a person. Every time I met frustrations, I felt like that I could not go through them. However, since I read “Gone With The Wind”, my mind has been changed. Life is difficult, but we should face it. The person who taught me that was Scarlett O’ Hara, a great woman. As a result of being born in a plantation owner’s family and being charming, Scarlett was very proud, vain and wilful.She had been married three men whom she did not love. Though the man she loved married his cousin, she still kept showing her love to him, which made her third husband, Rhett Butler, lose his patience to her. However, Scarlett found out the man that she really loved is Rhett finally, but Rhett wanted a divorce and left her. At that time, she acted like before and said: “I won’t think of it now. I’ll go crazy if I think about losing him now. I’ll think of it tomorrow. After all, tomorrow is another day.” Just like every time she got into trouble during the Civil War, she always thought of the trouble tomorrow and then faced it bravely. As far as I concerned, I feel like Scarlett is stronger than a man sometimes. She always fought for what she wanted. What’s more, she was so tough a woman that the fate couldn’t defeat her.

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