作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次较为清晰;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
As I know that you lost your confidence in learning English.I would like to say you can't give up even if you do your best.I think there must be something wrong with your meathd of learning English.Therefore,I would like to raise you up. With the development of the economy,language becomes an important tool when you communicate with others.What's more,among many contries' languages,English plays an important part in communication. But how do you improve our poor English? There are the ways. First,you should develop your amount of vocabulary.You can accumulate words from movies,songs and novels,which can arise your interests.Secondly,listening is an essential part in English.Don't look at the words when you watch movies even if you aren't familiar with the scence.Just get used to it.I believe all of you will achieve your goals.