作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
How to improve the school safety School safety is a matter of great importance. Great efforts should be made by the school to make sure the campus is safe. Firstly, nobody should be allowed to enter the school without permission. The school guard should check everyone entering the school strictly. What's more, the school security guards should walk around the campus from time to time so that some bad people can be frightened away. More importantly, school safety education should be offered by the school. Students can be taught what to do when faced with danger. As for us students, we should keep safety in mind whatever we do. We shouldn't trust strangers or give away our personal information to them.