文章衔接手法恰当;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用。
successful is not directly relative with beautiful,but recently,more and more people hold a view that beautiful people are more likely to successful.Even, many people think that now is a society that looks at the face. What we used to learn is that if one wants to be successful, one has to work very hard and pay enough efforts. It doesn’t really matter whether he or she is beautiful. However, in recent years, some people, especially the younger generation, are beginning to take a different point of view.
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