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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40868
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章衔接手法恰当;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

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Successful is not directly related with beautiful,but recently,more and more people hold a view that beautiful people are more likely to successful.Even, many people think that now is a society that looks at the face. What we used to learn is that if one wants to be successful, one has to work very hard and pay enough efforts. It doesn’t really matter whether he or she is beautiful. However, in recent years, some people, especially the younger generation, are beginning to take a different point of view.A lot of young people in order to make themselves more beautiful, took the road to face lifting.I think the beauty of the appearance is really more important than the strength? As far as I am concerned,the inner goodness is more important than the beauty of the appearance.In the modern society, with the continuous development of the economic level, people pay more attention to their appearance.In the study and work, the appearance can only temporarily bring convenience.It is impossible that you want to be successful because of your appearance.

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