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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较熟练地使用部分高级词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写。

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It's unwise to draw an conclusion by watching and listening It's unreasonble to make an conclusion when you just see or listen something at once without doing further realize .As we known that ,whatever you look at your present that may cause prejudce,for it we would be cheated by its apperance. Apparently,there are many rumors around the Internet which always come into terrible effect around us.For instance, too much people join in the team of wechat businessmen ,for them listening many words about that when you join the wechat's businessmen team you have success on the near future and would make more monye easily etc.And that's why our wechat's circle of friend have more and more advertise from wechat's businessmen . What'more ,a lot of people who was cheated easily by wechat businessmen's promotion by some the record of chat or pictures had suffered more or less losses ,because they bought some wechat businessmen sold many unquality goods ,like facial mask,cosmetics and other skin care products. Rumors are always fulled in our life because it is always accepted by people who likes rather believing or drawing an conclosion at random from deceits than thinking twice before you do.Whenever we'd better not making a conclusion just through looking or listening ot the face,even look through news.

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