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As a senier three student,I feel very tired of the praparation for the graduated exams.Luckily,I have my parents ,teachers,friends accompaning. My mother prepare the food according to my advice,and my father always talk the short-coming that I still have in the study after every exam.So I think I am really a luck children to be cared. When I am in school,our teachers are very patient to answer the question that we asked and never complained. And our school also give the help to us.For example,they let the library closed later than ever,only what to give us more time to study. So I believe without them,without me.It is their love that supports me go through that difficult time.