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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2270
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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评语:

简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。

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THE INTERNET Nowadays,internet is so important that we can hardly do jobs without it.But every coin has 2 sides,internet also has many disadvantages. The details are as follows. On one hand,internet has many advantages.We usually search information or send E-mails for study for it can rise the working efficient.Online-shopping is a new and convenient way to buy things so that it is also popular among the young people.So we can inferm that the internet has a lot of advantages. On the other hand,internet also has many poor sides.Spending so many time on online games is almost the worst.The result is that people may find they have less interest in the work and study and than getting in a poor circle.Another aspect is that lacking the face-to-face communication,the chatting and trade on the internet become less and less believeable.So we can inferm that internet has many disadvantages. As far as i'm concerned, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages.Only when we accept the postive aspects and get rid of the poor ones,the internet will be our true and reliable friend.

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