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2008年6月21日英语四级作文真题:互联网

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:11浏览次数:2267
要求:
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 
1. 有人认为网络可以让学习、工作更有效率 
2. 还有人认为网络让青少年沉迷,进而影响学习 
3. 你对于网络的看法
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

用户练习作文:

The Internet Nowadays,the internet is so important that we can hardly do jobs without it.But every coin has 2 sides,internet also has many disadvantages. The details are as follows. On the one hand,internet has many advantages.We usually search information or send e-mails for study for it can rise the working efficiency.Online-shopping is a new and convenient way to buy things so that it is also popular among the young people.So we can infer that the Internet has a lot of advantages. On the other hand,internet also has lots of poor sides.Spending so much time on online games is almost the worst.The result is that people may find they have less interest in the work and study and than getting in a poor field.Another aspect is that lacking the face-to-face communication,the chatting and trade on the Internet become less and less believable.So we can infer that internet has many disadvantages. As far as I'm concerned, the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.Only when we accept the positive aspects and get rid of the poor ones,the Internet will be our true and reliable friend.

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