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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨。
The Internet Nowadays,the Internet is so significant that we can hardly do jobs without it.But every coin has 2 sides,internet also has many disadvantages. The details are as follows. Some people think that internet has many advantages.We usually search information or send e-mails for study for it can rise the working efficiency.Online-shopping is a new and convenient way to buy things so that it is also popular among the young people.So we can infer that the Internet has a number of good aspects. Having some opposite view about the Internet,they believe that the Internet filled up with lots of poor things.Spending so much time on online games is almost the worst.The result is that people may find they have less interest in the work and study and than getting in a poor field.Another aspect is that lacking the face-to-face communication,the chatting and trade on the Internet have become less and less believable.So we can conclude that internet has plenty of shortcomings. As far as I'm concerned, the Internet has both strength and weakness.Only when we accept the positive aspects and get rid of the poor ones,the Internet will be our true and reliable friend.
