2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用。

To sum up, beauty not only make people feels comfortable, but also make yourself more confident.But beauty does not mean that success.If you want to be successful, this is the necessary condition of success is striving to improve yourself.If you do not have a beautiful appearance and you can be confident that confidence makes people more beautiful.