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With the development of the economy,the tourism is booming in China.With more and more tourists,there is a debate on whether the tourists bring the harm to environment or not.Some people hold the idea that tourists may bring the harm to the environment.On the contrary,some other people don't approve of it.In my opinion,tourists who are low-quality may bring harm to the environment. First，some tourists threw the rubbish everywhere,which made the environment dirty.It could pollute the air when the rubbish rot,furthermore,it brought harm to the air.Second,some tourists liked smoking.What's worse,they threw their cigarette butts into the water.Sometimes,they threw the empty bottle into the water,which made the water dirty and influenced the environment.Third,some tourists were crazy about taking photos.In order to make they look beautiful，they were on the flower.It really brought harm to the environment. Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that the low-quality tourists may bring harm to the environment.
