2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Beijing, the capital of China, has the strongest cultural color. There are many typical historical site and abnormal modern buildings. However, in spite of so many beautiful places, I recommend the Great Wall, which is a extremely long wall built thousands years ago and still exist today. It was used to protect country from outside enemies. Nowadays, It became a popular travel spot. People from all the countries come to visit the Great Wall. Many visitors challenged if they can finish all the way to the end.