字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Attitude makes everything As we can see from the picture, a bottle of milk falls and breaks, when two men see the milk pouring out from the bottle, they react quite the opposite. The pessimistic man’s eyes are sheltered from his hand and says‘everything has gone bad ’,while the optimistic man seems happy for he sees that there’s still some milk remaining in the bottle and hurrying to pick the bottle up. Actually this cartoon reflects exactly how most of us react on accidents or difficulties and also indicates that different attitudes result differently. Those who don’t dare to face straightly to frustrations could only make things worse. However, problems won’t be solved by themselves, people who be positive and eager to solve the problem they meet with their own effort can surely be successful easier than others. In real life, we can meet a lot of barriers which not only so simple like braking bottles but keeping us from going ahead on the striving road to success. Always seeing the bright part of the frustration makes us easier to find a way to overtake it. Just like the positive man in the picture, he paid attention on the remaining mike inside the broken bottle instead of the bottle itself, which is quite different from the other man. His attitude towards frustration implies that when facing those difficult barriers or failure during his way to success, he will also treat things positively and won’t be defeated by those stumbling blocks. In a word, life is like a racing road stretching long, no matter how careful we are in our journey, frustrations and stumbling blocks will always be there to examine our capability. It’s all right to stumble and fall, but never be so pessimistic and enlarge the difficulty we meet. Only cherish the positive and optimistic heart will make us overcome all the barriers and reach the success finally.