语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;丰富从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestin gplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?