语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量。
If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?