2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累。

If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I can take my friend to my school,because there has a lot of interesing thing in it. First,I can take my friend to my school,because there have a lot of interesing thing in it.