2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强。

If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown，what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I can take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting thing in it. First,I can take my friend to my school,because there have a lot of interesing thing in it.