采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量。
If a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why? First,I would lake to take my friend to my school,because there was a lot of interesting place in our school.In my school,the most beautiful place is the big Lawn.